Friday, 1 May 2020

volcano eruption

Today I was making a slide about my volcano eruption.
I enjoyed all of it.
I found it challenging build the volcano.
Next time I would change nothing.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Braiden
    Your slides are well presented and it's great that you have added lots of photos to show what was happening.
    Remember to give your name a capital letter at the beginning - edit it on your slides.
    Ka pai
    Mrs Parsons

    ReplyDelete

Thank you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comments.
Positive - something done well
Thoughtful - a sentence to let us know you actually read/watched or listened to what they had to say
Helpful - give some ideas for next time or ask a question you want to know more about

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